I would make these much more schematic. In the structure analysis you should leave out the furniture, leave just the structure. You can see an example with how I dealt with this here http://www.world-housing.net/WHEReports/wh100087.pdf Also, for the light maybe it would be good to colour the spaces which are lit, and make some curves what might remain in shadow. And for public-private the dialogue between shapes which embrace each category. I hope this helps, keep on the good work Maria
I agree with Maria's comments on daylight. These are often shown in plan.
I have also noticed on the location photo-maps there are the times of sunrise etc. This appear to be wrong, so perhaps is better to omitt them (or correct them).
Defenetely the sun never rises in Kent at 1:44am. Could it be that is shown as the US times?
Hi William,
ReplyDeleteI would make these much more schematic.
In the structure analysis you should leave out the furniture, leave just the structure. You can see an example with how I dealt with this here http://www.world-housing.net/WHEReports/wh100087.pdf
Also, for the light maybe it would be good to colour the spaces which are lit, and make some curves what might remain in shadow.
And for public-private the dialogue between shapes which embrace each category.
I hope this helps, keep on the good work
Maria
Hi William:
ReplyDeleteI agree with Maria's comments on daylight. These are often shown in plan.
I have also noticed on the location photo-maps there are the times of sunrise etc. This appear to be wrong, so perhaps is better to omitt them (or correct them).
Defenetely the sun never rises in Kent at 1:44am. Could it be that is shown as the US times?
hope this helps.
Regards,