I would have liked that you commented on each building telling what you like or dislike about them i.e I like the softness of materials cause it reminds you of an oak barrel or if you like the spaces that are intimate or the opposite i.e. how the spaces open into the sea etc. Also, think about the externals, i.e. if you like how the building integartes with the steped landscape etc.
I recommend you add a couple of lines for each project to identify what you like and why. No need to be big explanation, but will force you to think about it.
Hi William:
ReplyDeleteI would have liked that you commented on each building telling what you like or dislike about them i.e I like the softness of materials cause it reminds you of an oak barrel or if you like the spaces that are intimate or the opposite i.e. how the spaces open into the sea etc. Also, think about the externals, i.e. if you like how the building integartes with the steped landscape etc.
I recommend you add a couple of lines for each project to identify what you like and why. No need to be big explanation, but will force you to think about it.
Hope this helps.
Good effort so far!
Regards,
Daveed Barceló